Zeichnung verbesserung?

Hi, ich habe vor einem Jahr eine Zeichnung von einem Löwen gemacht da war ich gerade 12 geworden. Ich habe das selbe Motiv Jetzt noch einmal gezeichnet. Jetzt bin ich bald 13. Findet ihr ich habe mich verbessert?

Die rechte ist die alte und die linke die neue

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Highner64
2 years ago

I don’t look… I see a lion up, one down…

A strong improvement can be seen in the upper, the darker lion. There’s expression in there. The picture is alive. The character of the animal was made visible: strong, majestic, powerful, dominant. The line is – suitable for this – in the upper picture vivid, safe, conscious, strong…the lines are clearly visible, so nix hesitant, unsafe more. The shapes of the powerful muzzle, the relatively small predator eyes are well worked out…you can see the skull shape in its three-dimensionality (very important!!). Here the molding lines are worked out very well. The nose is nose and as such an anatomically correctly captured…and do not stop – as in the bright picture, “something undefined. The shadows right at the head show depth, which gives the man volume, dimensions…free!

The lower jaw/kin at the bright lion is significantly larger, seems more successful! This is where the dark weakens for me.

Both are good works, the dark ones are clearly better. Clearly.

So that was really – even the >Helle succeeded…nun take a mirror, set yourself in front of a wall, mirror on the knees and slantedly supported…and then draw yourself! The lion is a beautiful image, drawn by nem other two-dimensional image… now venture to something three-dimensional (Life portrait)…is a completely different degree of difficulty, but I trust you!

Tip: Do not make a beautiful picture…make sketches, practice drawing…

Highner64
2 years ago
Reply to  Highner64

Thanks for the

Highner64
2 years ago
Reply to  Highner64

Thanks for the star…

appple12
2 years ago

WOOOOWWW!

Both are really beautiful! I could never do that in life, both are really beautiful, but the right has more pressure and looks more powerful, so I decided to improve strongly.

If I were you, I would stick to it, you can do it!

LG APPPLE12:-) <3

appple12
2 years ago
Reply to  4real3

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sadguy23
2 years ago

looks totally mega nice! Keep going!

Urlewas
2 years ago

I am not an art – a connoisseur, but it is somehow a different style, and the second looks somehow “more grown up” I find.

Kometenstaub
2 years ago

Really? I think the first lion was better.

Samiraarts44
2 years ago

Ey, I’m pretty good at painting/drawing, but that’s really my level! That just looks so nice, I really couldn’t make it better

I really think the new looks much better, it was worked more properly, the shades look better and you just see it as much better than the old one. Go on, because it can be that you become a well-known artist

seppon
2 years ago

The contrasts have definitely become much better. Otherwise, they are quite similar.

seppon
2 years ago
Reply to  4real3

I found the symmetry in your old drawing. You don’t want perfect symmetry. That would look weird.

AbcApfel
2 years ago

Hey,

I don’t have a “sulted eye” for it now, but I think the second picture looks more detailed and the shades are really good. I only find one thing I wouldn’t call perfect and that would be the right ear. Both drawings are definitely mega, more so…

🙂

AbcApfel
2 years ago
Reply to  AbcApfel

Minimally improvedbecause I found the first very good and it would be difficult to surpass it. And you did it again:-)

nicostaber
2 years ago

Hey!

Your shades are much better, even the details are more detailed. The symmetry has improved and you have also worked more cleanly!

Go on.

LG

nicostaber
2 years ago
Reply to  4real3

Sure.

Neugierig123186
2 years ago

Looks good