Would you be interested in this story?

I'm currently writing a Wattpad story out of boredom.

Here is the description of the story:

"An old book without a title or author. What could possibly go wrong? After all, Morana loves books. But soon she realizes… Every word, every page of this book traces the thread of her life—until its dark end…"

Morana longed for peace and nature when she moved into her remote forest house. But a mysterious bookstore in the small town of Backston brings an eerie twist to her life. An anonymous book with no title or author seems to know every detail of her life. Soon, her seemingly normal life transforms into a nightmarish thriller, as gruesome events that initially existed only in the pages of the book suddenly awaken in her reality…

here is the cover:

Would you be interested in something like this/is it exciting? What else could I change?

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Seraphiel0
1 year ago

Reminds me a bit of Agnes, we’ve read it in German. However, Agnes knows who the author is – it is her partner who only recounts her life history, but then more and more pretends what Agnes has to do until the partner finally describes her suicide.

Well, I probably wouldn’t read it, but I’m sure others would.

tinalisatina
1 year ago

The idea is not bad, the cover already, the flap text so lala… I myself would probably not read it because it is not my genre.

BeviBaby
1 year ago

I got the story in the closet, so it’s not new.

The flap text is full of tempus change, which seems unpleasant to me and of course also stops me from striking the book, because it will probably continue like that.

The cover… I think it’s okay if there’s no picture on it or something, but if I saw it like that at Wattpad, I’d read ‘Inf of Destinn’. And that wouldn’t be the Bringer.

MimiRose13
1 year ago

That sounds soooo good!!! I would buy the book right away, the story sounds really exciting. But you could change the name Mystic Hollow because it sounds a little too clichéd. But otherwise right, really exciting.

MimiRose13
1 year ago
Reply to  Liyahrdc

Same. I always do three thousand internet searches and then I take the first idea…

verreisterNutzer
1 year ago

Hey!

Wooow. Amazing! Would read/purchase the book/history SOFORT. The description sounds really good and the cover looks very appealing. I already like the type of flap text, like it’s already a story. The story sounds exciting, the plot thought through. I like the main cockroach Morana. It is immediately sympathetic and has its own personality (mag books/natural).

The only thing I critise is the cover. I know I said that I like it – I do, definitely! I guess it’s not your own picture. If you have just screen-hoped or downloaded it without permission, you cannot put it on social media. It would be punishable if it wasn’t yours and someone would report it. It would really be a pity if you got trouble because you invented a special and packed story. (It’s just an assumption, I don’t want to blame you and just “protect” you!) If you are looking for pictures that you can download for free and use for public pages, watch o-dan.net by. Can also find really great things :))

I hope I could help.

Good luck writing and stay tuned!

Tessaaa129
1 year ago

wow this sounds megaaa megaa exciting! You’re very talented. You should definitely stick to the book!

Do you inform me if/if you get out?

Tessaaa129
8 months ago
Reply to  Liyahrdc

Oh, I didn’t. But I’m happy for you!