Write Warrior Cats history?
Hey!
So I'm currently writing a WaCa story and still need a main point of the story.
It started with a tomcat named Flamewing, he was the father of three kittens and had an unknown illness.
The mother suffocated in the snow and the father took the kits to Thunder Clan and died there.
The affiliation of the parents is not yet really clear.
I wrote that one of the boys died of the same disease. The foster mother was very sad about this and hated, or rather, still hates, the other two boys, simply because she liked the other boy better.
I have several ideas for the story but haven't really thought them through.
When voting, feel free to add details on how to implement the idea you like best.
(The Cloud Clan also exists in the story and much of it takes place after the 8th season, so every character is made up.)
Please explain your choice and provide details on how to write and expand on the whole thing in a meaningful way!!!
Thanks!
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Hey! :3
– Once I would tell you that the idea that the nursing mother simply hates her boys for no reason is not as good as it is: The queen “hasst” her two remaining boys because she is afraid to get used to her again and to love her, as her late boy died it was so painful that she didn’t want to experience it again and therefore seeks distance.
For almost everything a good character has a reason why he is as he/she is now, pay attention. =)
-Now on the actual question: I would say that the cats would leave because they think that the source of the disease comes from there, maybe she also comes from who knows but if not the trip could get worse because more and more cats are getting sick, here you could both use your ideas as “the disease spreads + the cats leave the lake.” Maybe you could also use number three so “the nursing mother makes her other boy life hard.” Could be brought in. ^^
I wish you a lot of fun writing and I hope I could help you, Lg -Coffe! <3 ⭐
Thanks for your tips!
My reason for hatred was that she was the young one who died (Orchideen boy) the weakest and she just liked it most.
When that died, she was angry with the other young, although they couldn’t understand anything for it? Bite like with millie as a flowerfall has run in the tunnel and she has been vaccinated while she always liked root light yk? (Idk whether that is similar)
I really think a trip is pretty good, but where could they travel? I don’t know how to think of a new place, and the lake is really good.
Do you have any idea how to incorporate the idea with the disease+the six clans and a trip?
I just want to make the character a short journey and return, you know?
Good. Now to the journey: So once shall you Think about your story. ; But I’d like to help you, maybe the clans wander for a short time to the trunk of the rushing water and look for protection, if necessary, the trunk cats are also affected by the disease and ask them to come home again because the disease does not come from the water (the disease could zbs. rabies that was transmitted by rats etc.) And they return, the sixth clan could be a group of sprinklers or maybe also trunks that join the clans? The rest is now your task to better. Lg -Coffe! <3
Hey, I’ve implemented the idea with the tribe and made it so that the main character (opal paw) always dreams of him, the problem is it’s more a kind of vision because the dream is supposed to say something important (what I think) but it can only have Heiler’s cat visions and I don’t want to be the Opal paw healer cat.
Can I write it that she still has “Visions” even if she is not a healer cat?
Hi! Vlt could you use all your ideas… Sounds pretty messy, but I meant that: Vlt comes a sixth clan on the run from a disease that was widespread in her old home. When they get on the journey they leave the place where the origin of the disease was back and at first it looks as if they had managed to escape from the disease. They find the cats at the lake and make for chaos but finally the Donnerclan (or in which clan is holding your story) is ready to give shelter to the cats of the 6th clan for the first time. The foreign cats tell nothing about the disease and invent a lie like and why they came here. But one of the strange cats still has the disease and so it gradually spreads in the Donnerclan. Vlt makes one of the other clans use the thunder clans’ weakness? You could also write that the Donnerclan assembles a group that travels to the former home of the 6th clan to find the origin of the disease and a possible remedy. Vlt the boys you mentioned pupils and one accompanies the group to the old home of the 6th clan while the other tries to prevent the dispute between the clans. And her nursing mother makes everything worse with her hatred.
I hope I could help you
I find the idea with the 6th. Clan better because you can add something good. The cats from the 6. Clan might know how the other cats can be healed, but what turns out to the end, as it has been delayed further. For example, the cats from the 6th Clan always just say they know a cure, but the others don’t trust them or don’t believe it and that’s why the cure is being delayed further and further until they find out that the cure really helps. They then heal all the other cats affected by the disease and everything is good again
It could also be used as a cause of conflict as the cats from the 6th. Clan thought they had a cure, for example, some cats run away for a short time. They find out that the disease comes from outside and therefore run back
This is a great idea thanks! 😀