Write a poem yourself?

Hello, I have to write a poem in German about the Baroque and I have just tried and would like to get your tips on how I can improve it because I have to recite it tomorrow

Baroque art,

Magnificent, full of shine and lust.

A touch of elegance,

And perfection in every dance.

Ornaments decorate the wall,

Perfection in every hand.

Great works full of splendor,

Witnesses of past power.

The light in the play of forms,

A festival full of beauty and norms.

A time full of wealth and splendor,

Baroque, the pinnacle of art junk.

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Enzi1
1 year ago

The repetition of perfection bothers me a bit. Either replace or make it a motive and use it more often