Wie schreibt man ein gutes Liebesgeständnis?

Ich schreibe gerade eine Liebesgeschichte. Ich habe schon ein paar Kapitel und bin mit den meisten ganz zufrieden. Aber ich habe Probleme mit den Liebesgeständnis.
Alles was ich bisher geschrieben habe war sehr kitschig und oder künstlich.
Hat jemand eine Idee/Situation wie man so ein Liebesgeständnis gut einbauen kann?

Die Figuren sind beides Jugendliche.

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sleepingbeautyy
2 years ago

Young people who make a love confession are always cheesy. Everything else would be weird.

Trauerklang
2 years ago

I haven’t written this so often, but I know a few tips:

  • Emotions with integration
  • Once again a defeat
  • Much communication
  • reflecting feelings of the person
  • Integrate tension and heartbreak
  • Long waiting for the answer

The main person…

  • may not be too intrusive
  • “must” XD be excited/anxious
  • hesitation several times
  • stuttering/red would have been embarrassed “good”
  • totally strained
  • does not perceive the environment while waiting for an answer
  • In confession, the honest feelings for the person must be stuck
  • You start with a scene in which they face each other (not in passing) and talk to each other
  • maybe also a few stotter sets/not complete sentences to make it more realistic
  • not throughout the literal speech (also sometimes: she/he took deep air. Or: I stopped.
  • Take breaks
  • Imagine what the characters say and the actions, helps a lot

Hope I could help!

LG

Andrastor
2 years ago

Leave it.

A confession of love does not begin a relationship of love, but at most strengthens an existing one. And as it works on me, you have to use this confession as the start of the relationship. But that’s just nonsense and doesn’t even look good at Schnulzen-Romanen. In addition, it brings (even youthful) readers completely wrong ideas about love and relationship.

And if you don’t find your own words for such scenes, you don’t like them well enough and how should they ever like them? As an author, you must always be the sharpest and most merciless critic.

Andrastor
2 years ago
Reply to  DerDumme813

But “it is clear that they love each other” and “lead a love relationship” are two completely different things.

I always advise on such questions here: for a confession of love it is sometimes between the 100th and 200th. Kiss and the 2nd and 5th times sex early enough.

If the two are “clear” in a mystical-magic way that they love each other, you have done something wrong as an author, because you can’t know something like that, but at the most you suspect. Even if you get a love confession, you cannot know what the other person thinks and feels.

Everything you look at as a love testament can be simply “normal” or “friend” behavior for the other person.

Andrastor
2 years ago
Reply to  DerDumme813

Personal attacks are just a certificate of poverty on your part.

Andrastor
2 years ago

And my plan worked perfectly. You felt provoked by the introductory phrase and came to my answer and what it looks like, you also noticed what I gave you so far.

If you can still overcome your unjustly grieved pride, you are on the best way to write your story so that you like it.

Andrastor
2 years ago

No, they’re not. You’re obviously just letting you take a premature first impression, so you’ll be personal.

As I said, a certificate of poverty.

And that the figures can read thoughts, you did not mention in the question. However, I wonder why such a confession should be necessary. After all, the thoughts would be more meaningful than any gesture.

Hundertstel
2 years ago

Press and kiss body. The confession of love is finished, and even on both sides.

AylinLupin
2 years ago

Just write what you think.