Help, there's a love scene in my story💀
not sex but first kiss, coming together and so on
I've never written a scene like this before, I need tips
thanks for the answers😂
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1. Write from the perspective of your characters. Try to put yourself in their thoughts and feelings to make the scene more realistic.
Two. Put the scene. Describe the environment, mood and atmosphere to create a romantic and sensual atmosphere.
3. Use sensual details. Describe the touches, smells and sounds to make the scene more alive.
4. Write what you feel. Write from your heart and try to integrate the emotions you feel into the scene.
Five. Let yourself be inspired. Read other love scenes or watch romantic movies to inspire you.
6. Edit the scene. First roughly write the scene and then rework it to ensure that it is well written and achieves the desired effect.
I hope these tips will help you 😁
Like Fuchssprung said, describe the feelings and emotions of the characters at this moment.
I like to write something like that. If you can, sex scenes are no longer a problem. I write youth fantasy and there’s sex. But in spite of sex, there is sometimes talk, accidents happen like head bumps, etc. It doesn’t always have to be the perfect moment. I even find that boring and somewhat unrealistic. Similarly, it is not necessary to describe the act in itself very much, because it is not an erotic novel. It looks a little different.
Try to witness the situation in thoughts.
Put yourself in your characters, describe their emotions- nervousness, excitement, uncertainty, joy,…
Body language, small gestures and details, how do they perceive the situation?
Describe the atmosphere, the light, the sounds, the scent,…
What do they say? Where are they? What happens in/with their environment?
Describe smaller details which are important.
Write liquid. Maybe build dialogues, build tension.
Bring the characters closer together, insert hints or hints, let the reader know.
Consider the qualities and personalities of your characters. Your actions and reactions should fit them.
Hope I could help
Success in writing:)
You are not going out of action, but from what happens in your actors. Describe the feelings how the heart suddenly begins to hammer, how the mind sets out, how the craving begins, the respiratory frequency, the eye impact, the touch of the hand, the tingling in the abdomen…
Once you’ve done this, the subsequent love scene goes all alone on stage.
Thank you, I can use it very well
😁 and that of someone to describe a romantic situation of horror. Very good, my dear fox leap. You’re right. produkt
Well, that’s the precursor of romance. I have no problems. Only when he knees and opens the box with the ring. Then put the problems in place. I’m really bad.
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What am I glad I have you 🙂
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