Which story would you rather read?
1.) A girl from a family with a winery and a winery falls in love with a barman trainee from a wealthier family. He works because he's interested in it and wants to learn new things. They fall in love when they work together, and so on.
2.) A girl from a family with a winery and a winery falls in love with her brothers' (twins') best friend. They've known each other their whole lives, and he's had a crush on her for years. She then falls in love with him, too, after a year abroad or something.
Not both.
Winemaking is not a topic that interests me so that the environment alone would be enormously attractive to me and both sound like typical 08/15 love stories.
The first is perhaps even more special… you can work well with the environment and, if necessary, Bring details on viticulture, which might be of interest to one or the other. Grade when you go to a ‘home love story’ about ‘vine’.
The second sounds just like the plot of every 08/15 Wattpadlove story, only this time it comes from the area of winemaking.
I’m sorry both stories don’t speak to me very much. Among other things, this is because your idea is obviously not completely elaborate. What do you think? The first idea ends with “and so”, the second with “or so.” So, just think about it again, then ask again. The part you have not yet thought through could make the story readable, yes, even exciting.
The fact that I have not yet elaborated the stories is that I want to make a decision. It would be unnecessary to work out both stories and discard the others. I asked the question to see which story other people find better. I chose 1 and I’m about to work it out. ;
I’m glad you made a decision for you. Then put your plan into action, I’m excited.