What exactly does Steam Support want from me?

Question

I would like to get permission to make the Steam shop page for one of my games public on Steam, but at the moment I don't understand the exact requirements of Steam support or what exactly they want from me, what I should write in the description so that I can finally get the green light and put the shop page for my game online?

This is my third attempt and it takes 2-3 days to get a response!

What exactly does Steam Support want me to add to the description? Because I've already mentioned as much as there is to know about the game without spoiling the rest of the plot…

They also suggested something like: " (FPS, puzzle game, survival, RTS " but where exactly should I put that in the description if it even belongs there, or whatever they mean by that?

The rejection email:

My description in Steamworks:

anonym55121 · Answer

You just have to write more about it.

dennisy1507 · Answer

What are the elements? Are there any special skills? Can you interact with the environment?

marcelhd40 · Answer

I hunt every set I wrote again by: https://rechtschreibpruefung24.de/

limearts · Answer

I would say too little content.

Even with other trash games from the Yandere division, the volume is well and liked to be twice as long, especially gameplay mechanics and special features correspondingly highlighted.

Your description is not only very short, it does not even reveal anything about the gameplay to be expected. And this is simply too opaque as a 'sales argument' as well as product description. The support will therefore probably require a revision.

lolwis111 · Answer

Keep in mind how many levels there are, or what “Challenges” you have built in. Search things

germanils · Answer

Simply read and understand the text and expand the description based on it.

For example, I don't know what kind of graphics are used, what the game principle is (resolve puzzles? Kill enemies?), what kind of representation is blurred (First-Person-3D? Isometric?….), how the control works etc. pp.

Let yourself be inspired by the descriptions of similar games.

qugart · Answer

Well, under "About this game" you didn't exactly describe what the game is about. Features, content, gameplay.

You just write something about the background of the story, but nothing about the actual gameplay. Theoretically, this could be a shooter or a card game.

marcelhd40 · Answer

How is the improvement that I wrote in the commentary area at "Limearts"?

monkeyking · Answer

Maybe you're still writing exactly the game mechanics. From what perspective do you experience the whole thing, how is the game history, do you have to solve puzzles, or do you have to fight/shoot, are there levels, etc.?

mrcuukie · Answer

Since your description is in English (see picture 2) I would https://spellcheck24.net/ take this is their English page ^

marcelhd40 · Answer

As I translate this has already its correctness but how is this update?

Description:

Yandere Escape is a: (Indie, RPG, Occupational Game, Horror) game that is about getting away from an unknown institution where your kidnapper has dragged you.
To escape from the unknown facility, the ones have to go through many doors that bring you in 20 different spaces to work for you to the exit. But be careful! You're not always alone!
She's an insane psychopath who thinks you're your property and doesn't want to leave. But if you don't want to hide in this hole, you have to take the next best opportunity to find the exit without letting you catch it.

mrcuukie · Answer

Well... without knowing the game or the gameplay or even having seen anything from the game... you can't say anything about it...

marcelhd40 · Answer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BD2wz76R-xo

mrcuukie · Answer

So... after watching the trailer, I find the description pretty good... Maybe you fill this with a few info... Name of the character? What year is the story? When did she take him? (or how many days have you been kidnapped?) and what else could you write in? Or, for example, that you have a flashlight to help... To the flashlight: Do you always have them or do you get them later? (So ​​what else could you write...) And your description... Section 2, line 1: " To escape from the unknown facility, they must go through many doors," Do you really have to "go through many doors," or "do you have to go through many doors"?

anonym55121 · Answer

Why do you censor the name of the game first and now you send us the trailer with the name of the game?

marcelhd40 · Answer

Because I would otherwise be asked to advertise directly here and this question is deleted more quickly before I can see the first answers.

(My past experience)

if I tend to comment on it and you ask me directly then it seems to be great.

In addition, I can't say anything about it if the Char doesn't even know about it after the story:

Story:
I was just drinking a beer with my best friends from work and now I'm here…
My head hurts, I don't have a pale glimpse of where I am and who is this creepy girl, what's already staring at all time!?
[b]Main target:[/b]
Find one out outside and try not to be caught by the Yandere.