What do you think of the title for this story?

Hello 🙂

I've written a short story and I'm unsure about the title. I'd like to call it "Do You See the Swallow?" because that captures the story's content well and it's a recurring phrase. But I'm not sure how it will affect someone who isn't familiar with the story.

I don't know yet if I want to publish the story (Wattpad or something similar) but I still want to choose a good title.

Does this title arouse curiosity or is it simply one that gets lost or is somehow meaningless?

Thank you so much to everyone who responds!

(I deliberately didn't describe the plot of the story because I'm only interested in the effect of the individual title. I can do that later, though, if anyone wants to know.)