What do you think of the text?
Hello,
Could you please read through this text and tell us what you think? Feel free to point out any suggestions for improvement or spelling errors.
The text is a debate on a statement in English. Question: Students should be allowed to choose their subjects themselves.
Hey, the text is good. But you could try to find synonyms (for example in the word “subject”). You could also add a few “linkingwords” like “furthermore” or “moreover”.
Thank you for the tips! I will try to build more linkingwords in the future