What do you think of the drawing?
This is my first eye. I'd like to know what needs to be improved. I'm not satisfied, but I don't know what's wrong.
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A good approach for the first time…
Try to focus more on giving Iris more stability. The pattern inside is usually not as smooth as you have drawn it or usually has more structure. The interior of the eye could be more shaded and the water line can be drawn more strongly, as it goes down a bit in the picture. Another paper would probably help you very much. The one you look very rough, which leads to more pigment being applied to the paper (which is of course actually good), but which leads to the fact that the pigment is moved too much and, as you can see, then lubricates….this is, of course, unsightly.
The front of the lacrimal gland is too long and looks a bit strange.
The eyelashes are somewhat too thick and much too uniform. This makes these seem very unnatural.
Just continue daily…then you will improve from time to time 🙂
Thank you, I will
Shake the eye a little more. The iris looks perfect but the rest looks rather two-dimensional. More shadows on the edges and so that the eye looks round. Below and to the right of the eye even more shatting.
Yeah, I’ll try it. Thank you
So only from the eye itself the rest looks two-dimensional. Outside, above all, it looks very real.
So first of all, the drawing is really good!!!
I don’t know very well with drawings, but I liked to do it back then. A few things I noticed:
As I said, I don’t know that well, but these are the three things I noticed in the good drawing.
Thank you
First picture:
The upper eye is too dark. For this, the lower eye should be a bit clearer. The eyebrows do not have the right shape, these could also carry finer lines.
The shape of the eyelashes is better when the rear-pit is brighter. I would increase the number of eyelashes by twice. The orientation looks okay.
Second picture:
too much dark and blurred…I would bring back brightness with bright color or white pen. Reflection of lower eye, eyeball, reflection in the eye.
Fine funky lines for all edges
If you like, I’ll let your eye be tracked by an AI (all offline).
Huhu, I just read the message.
Thank you for the suggestions for improvement.
Yeah, that sounds great with the recording.
LG
Wow. There’s a lot, very good. Maybe you have to work on your shadows, or on the shades, from the lower eye song this is very thin and looks washed away. The eyebrow could wear more “loves”, which, unlike the rest of the eye, do not seem so realistic.
But otherwise, it’s a really good job, so on.
Thank you for the answer and yes, Shadows are likely to improve much
The upper eyelashes are so dark, the lower totally bright?
The eye fold is also very dark, as with Make Up evt
The area between eyebrow and eye is not plastic
The pupil could be a bit more round.
Light reflex and eyebrow beautiful.
Thanks for the answer
So I am not an artist.But I find this very well done
Thank you
The Braue is too close to the eye that belongs higher.
Okay, thanks
Oh, I forgot – the eye is great, the best I’ve ever seen here. 🤩👍
You think so? Hmm, the eye areas are so different among people, in some cases the brews are really not very high above the eye. But good, it’s just a matter of opinion…
By the way, find your name great – so mentioned by the way… 😊
LG :
Yes, you’re right, that’s really very different….but the eye looks so beautiful and this Braue has something primitive – doesn’t fit together.
My name? Old proven and very real!
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Good.