What do you think of the chapter?
What do you think of the chapter?
Is it well written?
https://www.wattpad.com/1401714958-ein-wimpern-schlag-und-ein-step-ins-ungewisse-%F0%9F%A4%8D
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Hey!
So the action itself is very good. You want to read and learn more immediately.
But Verofant is right: there are damn many spelling and grammar errors. You really should pay attention or let someone read it, because it doesn't read well as it is now.
Positive: You write so that you can imagine and have everything, I think a gift for interesting plots.
Negative/improved: You could write more thoughts. Don't worry about it, it's not boring, I used to do it! (too little thoughts).
Maybe you could add a little more descriptions.
Hope I could help you 😊😊
Thank you
There are too many spelling and grammar errors in it. Let's get a doctor over it.
Maybe it's not bad in content. But because of the mistakes, you only slowly progress in reading and give up sometime. 😐🤷
She's probably incredibly young, and a leg for Wattpad would be new to me…
I'm 14.
I'm from the old blow and I don't know what Wattpad is. 😏☺️🤷
I'm sorry, but I just made it through a spelling error program, can you tell me where errors are? 😅
Correct capitalization and lowercase letters you should be aware when you publish written.
After "where" comes a comma
I like to help 😉
Thank you.
Behind the word "control" comes a comma and "written" is written big
Oops
Yeah that's young
understanding; on Wattpad many young people write their own stories. Everyone can register and live creatively. 😄