What do you think of my haiku?
Lonely tears,
Silent farewell notes blow,
Living in shadows.
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I'm not an expert in Haiku, but I think it's good.
Look here. Maybe interesting. https://mulan1.de.tl/Haiku.htm
Your Haiku is very sensitive and atmospheric. It captures melancholy and loneliness well in the chosen words and images. The use of natural and music symbolism strengthens the emotional depth of the shark. Overall, it is a successful representation of sadness and loss. Well done!
Thank you
Just good. Congratulations.
I'm a bit drunk but
Yeah, I'm fine.
Weep notes? What do you mean? sound? Sounds? Sheet music can't hurt.
Otherwise good.
I can't do anything like that.