Welches Bild ist besser gelungen?
Ich male gerne Fotos ab, oben ist das Foto und unten mein Bild
1. Das habe ich letztes Jahr gemalt (mit 12)
2.Das habe dieses Jahr gemalt
Findet ihr die gut? Mich stört irgendwas an daran. Hat irgendwer vielleicht noch Verbesserungsvorschläge?
Hi.
I’m both really good. I like the first one better, because the second part of the ambulance goes a little down. Looks like a buck or something. On the other hand, it looks a little long. Well, you could improve that. I don’t remember anything.
I hope I could help you.
LG
Louxi
The kink is in the original too.
I mean, it looks like a buckling up.
I thought they were under accident vehicles. But now both are good. I think that’s better. The rims e.g.
In both pictures still air up but I find the second better.
At the top of the picture, the box is not exactly as in the original, at your picture the front becomes lower, so this looks oblique.
In the second picture the perspective is not true, looks as if the front part was bent and would stand high
Basically, I find the pictures very good, detailed. Well done only at the perspective and on straight lines you need to practice a bit more 👍
Hey, if you would create shadows and highlights with different colors, the pictures would be more beautiful