Welches Bild ist besser gelungen?

Ich male gerne Fotos ab, oben ist das Foto und unten mein Bild

1. Das habe ich letztes Jahr gemalt (mit 12)

2.Das habe dieses Jahr gemalt

Findet ihr die gut? Mich stört irgendwas an daran. Hat irgendwer vielleicht noch Verbesserungsvorschläge?

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LouxiCasperan
4 months ago

Hi.

I’m both really good. I like the first one better, because the second part of the ambulance goes a little down. Looks like a buck or something. On the other hand, it looks a little long. Well, you could improve that. I don’t remember anything.
I hope I could help you.
LG
Louxi

ShadowOTW799
4 months ago
Reply to  LouxiCasperan

The kink is in the original too.

LouxiCasperan
4 months ago
Reply to  ShadowOTW799

I mean, it looks like a buckling up.

Ultraturk
4 months ago

I thought they were under accident vehicles. But now both are good. I think that’s better. The rims e.g.

5432185
4 months ago

In both pictures still air up but I find the second better.

Gabby66
4 months ago

At the top of the picture, the box is not exactly as in the original, at your picture the front becomes lower, so this looks oblique.

In the second picture the perspective is not true, looks as if the front part was bent and would stand high

Basically, I find the pictures very good, detailed. Well done only at the perspective and on straight lines you need to practice a bit more 👍

Tammy244
4 months ago

Hey, if you would create shadows and highlights with different colors, the pictures would be more beautiful