Was kann ich bei dieser Zeichnung noch verbessern?

Dieses Bild hatte ich in einem früherem Stadium schon einmal gezeigt und habe gute Tioos bekommen und wollte fragen, was ich hier noch besser machen kann.

(Die Eiche bekommt natürlich noch Blätter)

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Suki13
1 year ago

You can add a background and make the outlines even thicker if you want and maybe make the shadows darker. But looks great now. Achso and construction best add small details, because the more details, the more realistic it looks and really take time for the picture.

Lovely evening

SturerEsel
1 year ago

More light! More shadows! You give away your possibilities by taking a long distance to the deer.

Why no animal portrait from nearby, because of a few trees as a background?

SturerEsel
1 year ago
Reply to  DieechteWolke

Decide for a side of light incidence. For example, at the top right. All that is left below – also the left side of the tree – shade dark.

gatzenfuesse
1 year ago

looks flat

gatzenfuesse
1 year ago
Reply to  DieechteWolke

times bigger and use another perspective / angle

Kruemmelkugel
1 year ago

Otherwise, try more generally to shades, which gives the image a different depth