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farbwasser
10 months ago

It’s all right. The oroportions can still be used. The N is too small and I find the O to “less O” through the shape. The J is too far behind the A and next time I would leave the right swing that goes up to the S. I find him too dominant. It works almost as a separate letter. If you leave it, the S can get closer to the A. If you still make blocks, it looks good.

Make the also thoughts about which add ons really make sense or just fill room. like below between S and O…

Generally, it’s always just ideas and everyone can paint as he wants. Have fun.

RESET12Graff
5 months ago
Reply to  farbwasser

Colour water has always the best answer

farbwasser
5 months ago
Reply to  RESET12Graff

I try to help where it is

Sagichnicht171
10 months ago

Maybe the shadow of the letters does not have to be more extreme, but you have to recognize that is one.

Mauritan
10 months ago

I like very, very good.

This means improving jammering at a high level.

I have two things:

(1)

It’s a bit unclean, there are lines in there that aren’t “poored” and look like design, about right.

2)

It’s not quite in balance. Hang it on a wall and walk 5 meters away. Then it will work like something that comes out of the tube as an irregular baffle. The right side is a track too thin.

You can fix it by retrieving the signature (but not the date) slightly to the right. Then the date is before the signature, but the space is more harmonious.

jonschneee
10 months ago

Use a little more colour 😉

RESET12Graff
9 months ago

Horny Wildstyle! So from my skill level, I say you can’t improve anything. It’s perfect. There’s only a 3D effect and shadows missing, but I hope you do when you’ve painted out. From the color perspective I would now take colorful colors like purple and green and so🔥🔥

miilah
9 months ago
Reply to  RESET12Graff

I thought you were someone I used to know here, but I need to block it right away…