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EinMenschIstDas
2 years ago

the whole poem embellished the toxic side of the lyrical ego; everything sounds so romantic “soft ashe”, “sandburg”, “Baum”, “Blume” – but it burns down the house, it destroys the sand castle, there is no place for the tree, the flower takes the opportunity to grow

the lyrical I beautifies the wrong, harmful treatment in the relationship

EinMenschIstDas
2 years ago
Reply to  cmaster000

“in own words”

earnest
2 years ago

If you link the poem, I’d like to look at your question again.

Greeting, earnest

earnest
2 years ago
Reply to  cmaster000

Thank you.

I also think this is a toxic, more than an overarching kind of “love” that does not allow the opposite to be what it is.

All these obviously desired changes are aggressive and destructive, culminating in the “shot” in the last line of the poem.

Sooo “sanft” I don’t find this ash at all. Here is apparently someone as Relationship branders on the way.