Test reader for the first chapters of a fantasy story?

Hello everyone

I started a novel a few years ago and I actually really like the idea behind it. It's similar to the Percy Jackson series, but I don't plan on publishing it anytime soon. Especially since I'm only finished a few chapters at the moment. I'd like to continue working on my project, but I'd like to get some critiques. The story is being read on Wattpad, but no comments are being written, so I don't know anything.

Does anyone know of another platform or is interested? I'm trying to write the story as seriously as possible so it doesn't seem too juvenile. Nevertheless, I sometimes catch myself using clichés or making other mistakes.

Thank you!

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D3rBaecka
1 year ago

I'd like to take a look at it and give my opinion on it if you send me the link.

BeviBaby
1 year ago

I like to do something like that.

BeviBaby
1 year ago
Reply to  Jonnhyb24

you can send me the link to your wattpad

Unknowen1
1 year ago

So if you're looking for someone else, I could also look at it 🙂