Hey 👋 I'm currently writing a book in my free time. I'd like to jump from the perspective of the first main character to the second. There will be a third part with the third perspective. I've now reached the second girl, and I realize it's completely overwhelming, as I really want to adapt my…
I wrote an email to my math teacher yesterday, and he replied that I should improve my spelling and my writing style regarding politeness. Could someone please correct me and tell me what I misspelled or what I should phrase differently. Hello, I already passed the mathematics entrance exam for my previous degree program, Business…
My best friend and I want to attend a writing workshop because we want to write a book. But we can't find anything online. We're 13 and 14 years old.
Hello I would appreciate tips on how to improve my writing style. Thanks in advance for answers ^^
Hello, I got a B on my school assignment and my short test yesterday, and the teacher complained that I still have a big problem with my writing and sentence structure. He told me I should write shorter sentences and use more common vocabulary. But how can I work on writing good sentences? I usually…
I've already earned a few hundred thousand readers on Wattpad with several stories, but I basically know nothing about stories. I've been wanting feedback on my writing style for a while now. It would be great if you could share your thoughts on this.🤓 The introduction is deliberately fast-paced and aimed at young people. This…
Hi, I got my short assignment back yesterday, and the grade was a B-, which was very disappointing. My teacher told me that I actually wrote a good assignment, but I still made a lot of grammatical errors, and my sentence structure was very complex. I'm taking my Realschule diploma next year, and if I…
Hi! Question is above. I'm currently revising one of my books. My current focus is on slowing down the pace of the chapters and making the entire book feel longer. Unfortunately, I don't know how to do that. LG PS: It's a story about mates, or werewolves. With little action.
Hello, I have now revised my blurb again and would like to know your opinion on it. At some point, you have to give up and be content with what you have. Even if that means leaving your entire clan behind and waiting for a new—and better—century. When orphan Hailey learns that a young couple…
Hi, I'm currently writing a story on Wattpad and wanted to hear your opinion on my prologue. The link is coming soon: https://www.wattpad.com/1225362411?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Kiss_of_Vampire&wp_o riginator=cp4aqxt6VCVrFr0Th6SmvYRXoUdilw%2FRFY8uC%2BetC3XgBvAO4xLBJN6aAl HXdFNsKGGgtHXyp9ZEc7JApE92fKayCR7WpHzjkofR4zqyTEpPrK9Mptq1%2BDl5qNQf3O9v
Hello, I asked this question a few weeks ago, but I've revised it now. I'd love to hear your opinion 🙂 Four worlds. Two feuding royal families. Two hostile beings, one of them on the way to fulfilling his destiny. Being an orphan isn't easy, Hailey realizes. But when you find out there's a couple…
I'm currently writing a story. Here is a short section: " Hungry, he ordered two Big Macs and a large fries. When Anton finally drove home, he saw a staggering man chasing a pigeon on the side of the road – he was obviously drunk. But he didn't think anything of it and just kept…