Hi, I recently wrote a description (yes, again) and I would like to ask you if you could perhaps correct the comma placement. It would be really nice if you could just take a moment and tell me why things are wrong and how they should be done correctly. Despite the summer heat, a classmate…
Hi, I've just written a description about a school trip for practice. I'm still in the lower grades at the moment and wanted to ask you what you think of the description. Perhaps you could give it a grade in the vote if you don't have time to correct everything. Despite the early hour, my…
I just wrote: I'm falling. Deeper and deeper. Beneath me lies the all-consuming darkness. Inky black. I feel nothing. Free fall, but it never ends. I fall, fall, fall, but never bounce. I open my tear-stained eyes. My hand clenches into a fist. I look into a bright light. I lie alone in my bed….