Should this work be written in the first person perspective?

Most amateurs tell their stories in the I perspective, but the least are able to tell them right well in this perspective. They simply tell them how they experience them in their daydreams and sex fantasies, with themselves as a hero in history.

They completely overlook the fact that they can no longer let their heroes do anything evil. They would have to explain evil and call a good reason for it.

In the perspective of the narrator you can make the hero much more complex. He must be a pig too. You don’t have to justify yourself, you just have to tell what happened. It is so much easier to make a story exciting, because you can let unforeseen things happen that no one had on screen.

Only too often the hero becomes a Mary Sue in the me perspective. He becomes a bored man who manages everything that can and knows everything.

There are only a few authors who are really able to tell a story in the I perspective right well. If one believes that one is a professional and not an amateur, then one should tell his story calmly in this perspective. I’m not a professional myself, and I’d rather just do it. I’ll tell my stories with a narrator.