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Subject: Brochure about orthopaedic custom-made shoes, profession orthopaedic shoemaker
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Your specialist for
orthopedic
Custom-made shoes
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Max Mustermann's workshop in the heart of Vienna has been manufacturing orthopaedic custom-made shoes, shoe adjustments and insoles since 1997
in traditional handcraft.
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Orthopaedic custom-made shoes are
Masterpieces of craftsmanship, which
to the individual foot problems of each customer.
Their perfect fit with supporting, cushioning and corrective effects ensures a comfortable walking experience that is free from discomfort.
Orthopaedic custom-made shoes are not only medical aids, but also an expression of style and personality,
which enable you to appear confident despite orthopedic limitations.
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Large selection of models
from classic to modern
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Choose your shoe model conveniently from our model book or design your dream shoe from scratch.
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According to customer requirements
individually manufactured
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Give your custom-made shoe
a personal touch through the
Choice of leather, color, closure type,
Sole and decoration.
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My work as an orthopaedic shoemaker
requires skills that go beyond mere craftsmanship. A keen sense of interpersonal relationships and empathetic communication skills form the foundation for meeting the high demands of my clients.
It always gives me a feeling of gratitude when customers leave me with a radiant smile.
Helping people improve their quality of life through greater mobility is my daily motivation to practice this healthcare craft.
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Subject: Brochure on orthopedic Footwear, Occupation Orthopaedics
Title:
Your specialist for orthopaedic shoes
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Since 1997, Max Patternmann’s workshop in the heart of Vienna has been producing orthopaedic measuring shoes, shoe alignments and inserts in traditional handicrafts.
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Orthopedic Footwear are masterpieces of craftsmanship, according to the individual Requirements each individual customer is manufactured.
Thanks to their perfect fit with supporting, consuming and correcting effect, they provide a comfortable walking feeling, free of complaints.
Orthopedic measuring shoes are not only medical aids, but also an expression of style and personality.allow to be self-confident despite orthopedic restrictions.
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Large model selection from classic to modern
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Choose your shoe model from our model book or design your dream shoe from scratch.
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customized
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Rent Your dimensional shoesa personal note by choosing leather, color, type of closure, sole and ornament.
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My work as an orthopaedic shoemaker goes beyond mere craft. A subtle sense of interpersonal relations and an empathic discussion form the basis, the high to meet the demands of my customers.
I am always grateful, if customers get me with a satisfied radiant Leave a smile.
helping people improve their quality of life through more mobility is my daily motivation, this Craftsmen to exercise.
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The spelling corrections are bold, my text changes are written cursively.
Thank you.
Thanks for ⭐
Customers leaving you are gone… (or dead)
Your motto should be:
“When my customers are so happy that they visit me again, I am satisfied with my result”
Such texts are really hard to read. You can hardly imagine the result.
Why don’t you take a screenshot of your brochure and show us? The text is important, but only makes about 10% of your brochure. Whether customers will read the brochure depends on completely different factors…
Thank you.
Smaller typing and writing errors: “Maßschuhe” is a nomen, so it is always large and written in plural with E at the end. Your broken formatting makes reading difficult here.
Okay, thanks.
Read it yourself from bottom to top
What do you mean?
Read the text from bottom to top. Every word individually. How to find easier mistakes
interesting, thank you