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I have my first Spanish school assignment coming up. We have to write an email about Mexico (past tense). I'd like to ask you to correct a few mistakes or give me some tips. Since this is my first year of Spanish,
Here is the text:
Hello,
What are you saying? What is your family? Yo y mi familia estamos bien.
La semana pasada estuve en Mexico. México fue fantastico
Después de llege a México, me fui a la playa.C omí helado en la playa. My favorite ice cream is the fresa. Al media for the city. Lots of interest in the city.
Comí paella para el almuerzo. Era una paella de marisco.Fue muy delicioso. Más tarde fui a fish on the beach. No cogi naga. Pero la playa era hermosa.
for the tarde for a museum. He visited many of the people of the indigenous peoples. Estuvo is very interesting. During the evening there is a restaurant. Pedi tacos. cuanto more picante more. I like tacos.
This night revolves around the airport. Después de 1 hora de Espera volé a casa.
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*¿ not forget about the question
*México (Own name, so big)
*después de llegué …
*me -> may be omitted; easy to play
*comi and helado
*ví much lugares interesantes/ ví muchos lugares que me interesan bastante
*para el almuerzo comí paella
*muy deliciosa.
*cogí
*ví muchas cosas … (preterito perfecto you use when something starts and is not finished yet. This does not fit in a museum visit on the previous day)
*estaba muy interesante
*pedir when ordering food is more used in Latin America, take better ordenar
*Me gustan los tacos
*esta still
*Después de 1h de esperar…
Pay attention to what time you need to take when (imperfecto, indefinido, perfecto) and on verbos irregulares. Accents are also important in the past, otherwise the time form or meaning changes. Look at gustar again how the verb is conjugated. But your text is very good for the first year of Spanish 🙂