"To make someone scream" – is this a correct verb?
Dear people,
a question, I wanted to inquire whether such a sentence makes sense or whether the verb has been chosen correctly:
"…he contorted his ecstatic face into a strange expression, which intensified as he accompanied the singing with strange cries."
Is this verb correct, or should I replace it with another one? I'm not particularly convinced by this one.
Thank you very much for all the tips!
Better would be:
Thank you. I thought about the “worn” (unsteady, intuitive), but then said that a song cannot be “worn” because it is not a soup.
“Purpose with something”, however, also belongs in the broadest sense to the expansion of a food. Just in the negative sense. You can put a soup with strychnin. Makes fatal.
Addendum: You spit a beach area with armored locks and mines or a wall crown with piles and glass shards. That’s the verb.
No, I don’t think so well. By the way, you can also season a speech with jokes.
Of course you’re right, so I’ll probably take the “worn”. I have also briefly considered taking “spicken” (transmitting). What do you think of this proposal?
Wouldn’t “accompanied” be better here? 😊
This is also a good proposal, thank you very much!