"To make someone scream" – is this a correct verb?

Dear people,

a question, I wanted to inquire whether such a sentence makes sense or whether the verb has been chosen correctly:

"…he contorted his ecstatic face into a strange expression, which intensified as he accompanied the singing with strange cries."

Is this verb correct, or should I replace it with another one? I'm not particularly convinced by this one.

Thank you very much for all the tips!

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JMC01
1 year ago

Better would be:

  • interrupted by screams
  • with screams
  • with screams increased
  • dramatized by screams
JMC01
1 year ago
Reply to  ZborcenyDrak

“Purpose with something”, however, also belongs in the broadest sense to the expansion of a food. Just in the negative sense. You can put a soup with strychnin. Makes fatal.

JMC01
1 year ago

Addendum: You spit a beach area with armored locks and mines or a wall crown with piles and glass shards. That’s the verb.

JMC01
1 year ago

No, I don’t think so well. By the way, you can also season a speech with jokes.

MaxMusterman353
1 year ago

Wouldn’t “accompanied” be better here? 😊