Meinung zu diesem Gedicht?
Lange Zeit habe ich daran gearbeitet, vielleicht muss ich noch etwas bearbeiten, aber es ist doch gar nicht Mal so übel. Was meint ihr?
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Buchtitel?
Byemelemi
Hey, ich schreibe ein Buch. Es ist ein Fantasy Buch über ein Flugzeug Absturz. Die Menschen müssen dann zusammen auf dieser Insel überleben und begegnen dort vielen Kreaturen und übernatürlichem. Wenn ihr Ideen für einen Namen habt, dann schreibt mir gerne. Ich bräuchte auch einen Namen für die Insel <3
Wie findet ihr Deutschen Russische Musik , könnt ihr damit was anfangen?
Wie findet ihr Deutschen Russische Musik , könnt ihr damit was anfangen?
warum kann man polnische orte öfter ins deutsche übersetzen kann aber nichts ins englische?
Bywalmmist
woran liegt das das man polnische orte oft ins deutsche übersetzen kann aber nicht ins englische
Was ist da falsch?
Was ist da falsch?
Darf ich die AOK als Quelle im Studium benutzen ?
Ist das erlaubt? Ist es eine wissenschaftliche Quelle oder eher nicht
Gorgeous (&) Intriguing!!! I know that feeling <33
Some people only mock small grammatical differences and overlook art. But you see that differently. Thank you! 😊
Thank you! I just find it so “to speak out of me” and beautiful!
🥰
^
I waited for the moment to be able to forgive him.
With kind regards,
Wolfen.
Wuw thanks for the star
I’ll release the next poem in a moment.
That sounds very nice!! 🥰 I love to read it!
What I wanted to say: I may continue to publish my poems here as well so that you can also read them. If your parents should not allow a FA.
Tell your parents the following: I am a serious person and 15 years old. I speak of honesty and never try to hurt anyone. Even if I’m strange, I’m not a bad person.
I’m not supposed to be friends, but I’ll try to convince my parents again!!
I also don’t really.. only on the Warriorcats Fandom.. and just here:/
Unfortunately not, but let me ask you: Where are you still active? I would be able to create another account as free as I am. We can also be friends. Both are possible for me.
Thank you. Unfortunately, I don’t have an Instagram.
Of course. I will continue on Instagram as well, the name is also written there. But here again: @wolfus_poetica
You impress me, Wolfen 🥰 I thank you for this poem and want to ask if I can make a screeenshot, of course only for me so that I can always read it if I need it 🙂
That was my first poem in 2022. I’ve been thinking, working, etc. Meanwhile I was plagued by sentimentality for a short time: I didn’t know anymore, I didn’t know if it was really good. But at last I’m done and look forward to such an honest opinion. Because it should be like this: captivating, pronouncing, etc.
The poem is nice, but very badly readable. Every bad readability is a self-evaluation, a shame. If a food has questionable ingredients, then the contrast is bad and the font is small.
What now?
The wolf looks great, and you want him with it.
Regroup the image and cut the wolf. Put it small to the top left or bottom right. Behind your poem should be a contrast color, rocks or trees, at least black. All that is bright, like the moon or the mirroring slides in a corner so that the coloration behind the text becomes uniform.
And the text? Better would be a bright pink, that the moon has, so that it looks out of a casting. At least turn the white part slightly higher.
Software, open source:
Colormania
paint.net (this is the name! no link)
I will occasionally revise it. It is enough if another has already proposed it. Nevertheless, I thank you.
I don’t think that poem is bad. The design of the picture, however.
What kind of picture would you recommend? The genre is best.
It’s not about the background. That’s okay. But:
But I would simply put on a plain monochrome background with white writing and then insert minimalist wolves, like a little wolf logo. This directs attention to the poem and not to the background.
I’ll remember that for the next time.
I am known here as a humorous game spoiler and must therefore point out that feminine words like Night Never -E hang in the Dativ, so the third line is ungrammatic. Maybe try. Night on is awake to rhyme.
In fact, I am aware, but poets can put so many things on their head that sound good with little sense.
And, of course, I could have written, “The wolf is awake for a quiet, dark night of blood moon. But I like it less.
I don’t want differences and I don’t want people to spoil the fun, but an honest, respectable opinion!
This is self-evidently clear to me, my self-description was also meant seriously.
Then you shouldn’t dismiss my work, but let it be the same! I’d like to accept an honest opinion, but I don’t believe that humbug. Anyone who spoils the fun is not a good person! Come on, you bad guy!
I’m serious.
In my opinion, poets can return a lot, especially old language features from the cemetery. But -E hanging that never existed — ɴᴇḥɴ.
But I also said that I always know everything better, lovingly like to count corinths and peas, don’t understand any fun and spoil all others.
Hello,
there you have lost – also on the big picture – when reading the eyes.
For me at least the beginning has a touch of “Get up or I eat you!”
AstridThePu
If there is a proposal for improvement, please.
Use a different design. The font in the picture has an unfavorable color and is too playful and snorted as if you could read it well against the background.
I accept every opinion. But that was more than an honest, true opinion. Nevertheless, I do not have to condemn you for your opinion and ask for apology.
You asked for opinions, and here you expressed an opinion So tolerant you should be and accept them – no matter whether this opinion fits you or not.
All right. I will not tolerate only this “Reim you or I eat you” at all! I’m sorry, but these expressions are not allowed.
The wolf was in you?
Hm otherwise good poem
The wolf is in me. In my good heart, in the cornerstone of my memory. I like to compare some people with animals, so I find it fascinating… But not to insult her and I don’t even speak it out.