Lyrical self analysis?

Hi, I've just reached the final part of my poem analysis and I have a question. I wanted to explain at the end what the lyrical I felt, etc. (because I've formulated an interpretive hypothesis, namely that the lyrical I reflects the inner self of the lyrical I through the forces of nature described by the author, i.e., the protagonist's hectic or crisis-ridden situation). I don't know if I'm allowed to write something like this, for example: "In summary, it can be stated that the lyrical I finds itself in a very crisis-ridden situation, etc." My teacher somehow suggested that we should be careful when we want to describe that the lyrical I did or felt this or that, or described this or that, since it was actually the author who described it (e.g., the forces of nature). I hope you understand what I mean. I would like to transfer my intention to the lyrical I, but I'm not sure if that would be right… I would probably have to write that the author described this and that in this way because he himself probably suffered from something, etc., right?