ByDilo5555
Hello!
I'm turning 16 and would like to help out at Müller. This is the first resume I've ever written. I don't have the application yet. I've never had any work experience either. I would really appreciate your feedback!
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Loading...I would like to work as an investment banker. Is a technical college sufficient for that, or would I have to go to university?
Gerechtigkeit bezeichnet eine soziale Gegebenheit, die subjektiv als gerecht beurteilt wird. Wäre das der passende Satz? Ich meine – wie kann man sonst etwas sehr allgemeines schreiben anstatt “jemand”. Gibt es noch ein allgemeineres Wort als dieses? Gerechtigkeit bezeichnet eine soziale Gegebenheit, die jemand subjektiv als gerecht beurteilt.
Welche Zeitform hat dieser Satz? Hat er vielleicht sogar zwei? Es ist schon immer besser gewesen, gewalttätige Karrieren erst gar nicht entstehen zu lassen.
Ich überlege nach dem 5.semester abzubrechen und dann einen anderen Studiengang zu studieren. Ich interessiere mich zwar eigentlich für beide Studiengänge aber das andere interessiert mich ein bisschen mehr. Oder meint ihr es wäre besser durchzuziehen und nicht zu wechseln? Jeden Tag mach ich mir Gedanken darüber und weiß nicht was ich tun soll
Through an internship at a restaurant… Or Through the internship at a restaurant…
He can’t. The letter is NOT in the CV!!
This is done individually. So remove the text completely
It’s almost all wrong. Please watch YouTube videos and websites as there are many great tips on how to create a resume. Forward:
You can’t do that. Please let family/friends/teachers help you again.
Thank you for the tips! I just let it be complete, did not help me, I won’t understand
Don’t leave! If you give up, you’ll never experience it. Hold on a pattern and keep it simple. Then nothing can go wrong. I like to check the resume again. Make one more so that you follow my tips and find the tips on YouTube and the Internet. The text itself is not bad, but it belongs to an extra letter.
And then ask a new question and I’ll look over it again. Just stick to the requirements and then you’ll get a real resume.
Hab’s now asked again in a question
Hey, thank you very much!!!
I’ve finished writing. Your tips were very helpful. Love you want to help.
I’m sorry, but I’d be ashamed of a CV like that. That sounds like if you’re just trying to get forced to work with MÃ1⁄4ller… the work there is shit and you’ll have a lot better! Sorry I’d throw this resume right into the recycle bin! Even if you only want to temporarily work with MÃ1⁄4ller and the work is special, you don’t have to tie the boss on the nose!
So I don’t think so. But thank you for your opinion. Could you tell me what exactly I should do differently, suggestions for improvement?
That’s how you feel you want to make it longer! I don’t care if it’s true or not! Because I as an employer wouldn’t hire you if I felt you were looking for just a few months! I would also leave this with the dream job Chirugin! Because that doesn’t fit together at all!
Oh, yeah. Jaa, but I think employers know that pupils do it for a short time. It’s only time. Thought I’d be more interesting with the dream job. But thank you, I think about it
What kind of translation program did you hunt this text?
What do you mean? Because of my name, this is often mispronounced, which is why the encircled S.
So I don’t think your comment is okay! If you make fun of my German, it’s just racist. I was born here and German citizen. If you mean anything else, I’m sorry I’m overreacting
No, the text sounds totally twisted and looks like one of those bad translations that sometimes come out of translation programs. That’s why I didn’t think you wrote the text yourself.
Anyway, you can’t do this.
Otherwise, I would join the tips of LilyInstaGirl, these are good advice.