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DrSommer420
1 year ago

Looks like you’ve given you 0 trouble and that’s gotten into 30 seconds, so no one really got better (even for a 7 year old)

LG. Oli

DrSommer420
1 year ago
Reply to  emmaschnuggi

Give yourself a little effort

DrSommer420
1 year ago
Reply to  emmaschnuggi

also with color?

pony
1 year ago

for cubism it is not cubistic enough.

not even the foreground you got. on the original, the person on the right is not straight.

please yourself and at least give yourself a little effort and draw instead of just filling the sheet.

in my art teacher there would have been a smooth 6 for such motivationless – because the labour refusal is.

with motivation, there was still a smooth 4th of which, even with total talentlessness, your attempt is miles away.

Glaskocher
1 year ago

I believe you should look again through a “abstraction goggles” if you do your sketch. I can only misrecognise the original on your photo, so I cannot correctly classify a given details as important or unimportant.

First pay attention to the most important statement of the original. These are the three women who gather the harvests. First try to simplify these women by first simulating the body shape in a rough outline. Legs, hull, head, arms. That’s enough if you’ve captured the vessels where they’ve put their desserts in.

Then subdivide the remaining area roughly according to what you recognize: field, forest, meadow, village, sky. Try what hatch or simple, repeating shapes you can fill the surface that you can still see what to see.

Abstraction also means leaving the unimportant. This means that you can leave many of you as unimportant details in the background.

Summarized: People who act, their surroundings, other areas, leave remaining details.

Just try it again. I wish good success!

JMC01
1 year ago

Not really. Everything is still much too clear and too detailed.

Agnostos
1 year ago

The picture is not abstract…

ohwehohach
1 year ago

No.