Can someone correct this text for me?
Small correction, instead of por cierto, better por esto.
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A good text, here are some suggestions for improvement:
Line 5: Bee (good) or Bueno (so good) …
Lines 6-7: los temas […] fueron (total consideration, so from the conclusion) … y también como tratar el acoso / tratas [con] el acoso
Line 10: El Internet (normally large, small is today but also accepted) it, en realidad, un medio [de comunicación] benificioso
Line 14: Iusa Internet! (the article is omitted here, because there are no different Internets to choose from)
Line 15: Por ejemplo puedes … usar diccionarios en lÃnea o (instead of y, because suggestions and not at the same time) sacar una foto de la pizarra y compartirla (share, share)/publicarla (publicarla).
Lines 20-21: puede ser que otros roben (or: accedan a; both subjuntivo because it does not come into effect at the moment) tus datos personales … que haya (dto.) ciberacoso. — If you want to write this without subjuntivo, you should formulate it without “puede ser que / es posible que”, instead evtl. “a lo mejor” o.
Fifth last line: it una cosa fatal (without muy, not upgradeable) / [muy, [pero muy] seria. Si estás afectado/afectada (if in front of weibl. audience or affected) … Habla con otras personas / Habla con una persona de confianza.
Page 2, 4. Line: y yo pienso que son buenas (released to las Redes Sociales) / que está bien [asÃ] (to the Tatasache that you did not have it)
Line 6: Un saludo … / Saludos … Quedo a la espera de tu (before you duce the person; match) respuseta