Can anyone help with this poem?

Hi, dear people,

It is about the following poem:

I've already analyzed the content. Can anyone help me with the meter and cadences? I would be very grateful.

Best regards

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neinxdochxoh
1 year ago

Five-high jams, cross-reime, alternating female and male cadence.

cas65
1 year ago
Reply to  neinxdochxoh

Old wrinkle. Where and why do you learn this? I can write poems very well. And I can also differentiate a pair of rhymes from the cross rhyme. But I never think about such terms. It’s probably like aircraft engineers and birds. The ones know everything and can calculate everything, and the others just fly. 😀

neinxdochxoh
1 year ago
Reply to  cas65

Yeah, that’s it. And both are important.

cas65
1 year ago

Humor is extremely important to me. I then had a few lines, but it could not add later. I was particularly pleased that the first coming user wants to nominate this passage because of NOT. Because yes, it must be understood. I want it to bite. Even if it laughs. Laughing is one of the best ways to show opponents the teeth.

Thank you for your praise.

neinxdochxoh
1 year ago

Thumb high and bravo for cas65! One of the most funny, freshest and naughtiest poems on GF ever. I laughed.
Delicious and others:

Do I have to Allah wudu duah?”
I’m getting out of my shoes,
because of religions
I’ve already taken a dozen neurons.

cas65
1 year ago

I pinched here for the gf birthday one. It was a real quick shot, but some people think it was nice.

Others can’t be set here in the comments (as graphic)

neinxdochxoh
1 year ago

Then put your poems in here.

cas65
1 year ago

It would be funny if someone came and told me about my own stuff, what I don’t even know. 😀