Can someone proofread?
I'm really bad at writing applications. Would someone help me with the wording and completion? I thank everyone who helps! The application is for an internship and is aimed at a residential group for 14-18-year-olds.
Application for an internship in the "…" group at the youth welfare office….
Ladies and Gentlemen
I hereby apply for an internship in the group…. I am very interested in gaining practical experience in the care and support of young people.
I already have experience working with children ages 3-6, which I gained during my voluntary social year (FSJ) and my training as a social worker in a ….. I am currently studying social work at the … and am in my … semester. During my studies, I occasionally support …
Through my internships in open child and youth work at B.. and at the youth center …, I was able to gain valuable experience. Now I would like to deepen my practical knowledge in another area of youth welfare to expand my skills.
As part of a block internship of … hours, starting from … I would like to complete my …. practical work experience phase with you.
I would be very happy to receive feedback…
Best regards
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Hello chillen16
Looks very good – just make the address more personal.
Ladies and gentlemen (from the house I don’t know anything about).
Dear Mr/Mrs. Pattern.
Write the head position in person.
Application comes from advertising so make advertising. An application is the introduction to a sales talk – the product you are!
It would therefore be an advantage if you have extensively informed yourself about the operation and can also name it, which is why you want to work in the operation of Mr. XY. What is the added value? Why would you do GENAU DORT and not IRGENDWO ANDERS an internship?
Your application sounds a bit like “I just want to care about who takes me”
More attractive is someone who smears me honey and knows how it’s going. Someone who can only find what he’s looking for in my business.
LG
I got the contact details of jmd, I should just send the application to the emails I received. there is therefore no name.
I wouldn’t have a problem with it now (is also only an internship). They are probably also aware that there is somewhere a list of companies where you can simply write an application to everyone and see who reacts or sends an undertaking. I would find it more important to “small around” if it were for a training or job or something (longer/more binding) 😀
That’s true – my answer is more for application in general 😅
thank you 🙂
Looks good. Only
“In the context of a block internship of … hours, from which”
the comma has to go.
It’s very good, only you could add the period and why you decided exactly for THE company.
What could I write for?
e.g.: “Through the platform “…” I came across your company and would therefore like to apply for an internship place with you.” Or alternatively: “through the newspaper display in newspaper…” depends on it, just like.
I find the application great, but would write one or two more sentences to why you now want to work with the older Jews, what you want to learn and why this target group and the work in a group of homes are particularly interesting. This could write directly after the following sentence.
Wish you a lot of success.
I think it’s really good! Good luck!
Terrible. Then just let Chat write GPT.
if you find it terrible, help me then please tell me how to write it
First, you jump on your text. Second, your text is 0815. Thirdly, you can mention your FSJ internships. But you’re in the CV as well as when you send your certificates. If you have any.
But you are taken anyway, because first, it is just an internship and secondly, such jobs are constantly looking for applicants.
When writing an application, it would be more important what you did. Experience beautiful and good, but is there something more concrete? You helped a project, you got something. And what’s that job? It would be important that you really want it.
How was that with respectful and helpful? I’d say all over the subject.