Is the email written correctly?
Hello,
I can speak German very well and I have to write an email to my daughter's teacher so I wanted to ask if it is correct
Hello dear Ms. Bombosch,
I am Fayrouz's mother. I am very sorry to be writing to you so late.
Fayrouz received her first two hyposensitization injections yesterday and has been experiencing severe side effects all day. My daughter hasn't been feeling well since midday today because she has a high fever and keeps vomiting, and she hasn't been able to fall asleep yet because of the fever. So I wanted to ask her if it would be okay if my daughter doesn't show up for math class today (Wednesday) because she'll be too tired? It's possible that she won't come at all, but the doctor said the side effects shouldn't last long.
Best regards
A. Mustafa
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A few suggestions for improvement (also pay attention to commas):
Dear Mrs Bombosch, (without “Hello”)
ich am the mother of Fayrouz. I’m very sorry that I Ihnen so late write.
Fayrouz got her first two hyposensitization syringes yesterday, and she has strong side effects all day long. My daughter hasn’t been well since this afternoon, she has highS Fieber and has to break again and again. [Because of the fever, she has not yet fallen asleep.] That’s why I wanted to ask her if SI agree that today (Wednesday) it does not appear in mathematics teaching, [because it will be too tired.] It may be thatS she does not come, but the doctor said the side effects should not be long onhold.
With Kind regards
A.Mustafa
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