Hey Leute!
Ich habe vor eine Geschichte über ein Mädchen zu schreiben, dass die vier Elemente beherrscht. Sie geht dann wahrscheinlich auf eine Schule, wo sie lernt damit umzugehen und so. Meint ihr, dass wird was? (Übrigens, ich will sie auf Wattpad veröffentlichen, da hab ich auch schon angefangen. Sie heisst “Die Macht der Elemente” ;)). Meint ihr, das wird was?
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Loading...Hallo Leider kann ich das überhaupt nicht. Ich verlier viel zu schnell die Motivation und starte ein neues Projekt. Aber momentan schreibe ich an einer Geschichte, die mir gut gefällt. Die will ich auf keinen Fall abbrechen. Habt ihr Tipps, wie ich mich mehr auf dieses Projekt fokussieren kann? Danke im Voraus 🫶🏼
Ich heiße in Wirklichkeit Erduan. Was hat dieser Name für eine Bedeutung? Für was steht er ?
Ich schreibe gerade ein Buch, wo eine Lehrperson einer Schülerin eine Therapie empfiehlt, die Eltern allerdings davon nichts wissen und es auch nicht sollten. Das ganze spielt halt in Schottland, jedoch weiß ich nicht, ob die Schülerin (fünfzehn) das ohne Zustimmung der Eltern einfach so machen kann.
Hallo ich schreibe gerade eine Warrior cats FF und wollte fragen ob ihr ein paar Ideen für namen habt. Es gibt den FeuerClan den NebelClan den SeeClan und den BergClan
All you ever said is really basic. This is everywhere on Wattpad.
Of course, you can stay with the idea, but I would recommend you when you talk about history, that is what makes it special.
This is hardly the whole idea. The girl still has friends and enemies and perhaps a destiny, a prophecy, a teacher, a romance.
Harry Potter is also just a story about a boy who goes to a magic school. This is basically the same as Mildred hopping and a thousand more stories.
The most important thing is to have fun writing. Element skills and a magic school are fun. Both in writing and reading.
I actually find the title something to Basic. I once entered this at Watty and got five stories with this title. The title sounds nice, so many take him, but he doesn’t stand out. I don’t know if it bothers you, but I don’t think I found your story about the title.
What you have so far is far too little to really talk about a story. You have a setting so far. This has been a thousand times and it will be a thousand times.
It’s not bad for the first time. Thinking out a setting that has not yet existed is as good as impossible nowadays. It is all the more important to show that our own history is still something special. But a story needs a conflict that is completely missing at least in your description.
Your title is also too superficial. “The power of the elements” fits every book where people can control elements. If you search for your title at Wattpad, you will find six pieces with this name, partly with an addition, partly without. Therefore, you are completely undermining in the crowd and, of course, do not make potential readers curious at all what your work is about.
I’d advise you to think about what you really want to write about. You won’t write them about a girl who can control elements. You will write them about a conflict she will experience. This can be the struggle between good and evil, which you will of course have to work out much more accurately. This can also be a Romeo and Julia Lovestory. She can also become a detective in boarding school and with friends a la TKKG/ solve the three question marks/the three exclamation marks magical cases. Or… or… or… Fantasy is such a broad genre, you can really do everything.
But the story must be very exciting and very well written. There are hundreds of such stories. You didn’t invent something new.
Yeah, I almost thought that… I have to try and deny more:)
If you’re convinced, do it. I also wrote books and was skeptical about my story first, but after a while I found Mega great.
So the main thing is that you like the story…
Write eif. and if you like the story then it can also become something if you stay diligent
My honest opinion is between “king something, but getting difficult” and “the idea is great”. I mean, the idea sounds good and can arrive at some good to very good, but it can be difficult to upload it to Wattpad
Of course, it can be good if everything is written on a rather professional level. But @sleepingbeautyy, @Kurzeilig007 and @GoodBetterVegan also have a good point. There are many of these stories on Wattpad. There are also films and series.
But if it is very different from other stories, it is a good thing.
Then the background must be correct.
because this with the “four elements” and the boarding school is a little bit cheesy… there is so much about it.
Yeah, I understand. Maybe she won’t go to a boarding school, I can’t say it yet. See 🙂
This is a topic that is very common in books, series and films. But can still work calibre
Those who do not control the basics of the native language – such as Interpunktion and “the” vs. “that” – should generally abstain from publishing texts.
Thank you for your helpful answer to my question. Of course, it is extremely important that text is written correctly 🙂
You read a few hundred times.