Is this aphorism good?
I wrote an aphorism, it reads:
You live your life in the mass of the rabble in the shadow of the low-minded, until the inner volcano explodes and ash rains down on your head.
How would you rate this text?
It's about my children's group, saving the chickens from factory farming, roughly told
Hey, Do you have any other ideas for elements similar to water, light, earth, air, wind, etc.? For a story! Greetings from Lilac Feather :))
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I do not succeed in evaluating content, sober. But as a “image”, as an unsharp description of a state of feeling it sounds good and a bit right.
However, this becomes really useful only in a 10 to 20-page text that goes closer to the topic.