Ich habe ein Gedicht über Einsamkeit geschrieben, wie findet ihr es?
Being social, open and funny is a blessing
A Blessing it is to be loving your voice, talking to others
A blessing until it turns out to be a curse
And it is a curse, when suddenly you sit alone
Alone surrounded by people
But all of them ignoring you, ignoring your exsistenz
senseless it seems, when everything is loud, but you are quiet
The Silence is new, eating your soul
The soul that was so precious, so openminded, so creative
But all ot that is gone and all thats left is silence
A silence full of self-doubt and self-talk
Suddenly your mind feels like prison,
keeping you away from talking
keeping you away from being all you were before
And especially keeping you away from yourself
It’s not bad, but you don’t get nobel prize.
Sealing art is very, very difficult and you need a very intensive relationship with your own language. In a foreign language, it’s rare.
Therefore my advice: Write in German. Properly good literature has always been written in their own native language.
Vocabulary of a student.
Could be more stylistic.
I am a student