ByTagevoll
Hello! Today I wrote a new poem about autumn and would love to publish it. Do you like this poem? Thank you.
The new autumn comes imperceptibly,
The air quickly becomes so fresh, so cold…
And every year it happens similarly,
but its content is quite different.
Autumn rarely brings warm days,
rarely brings strong sunshine.
But I don’t ask myself the question,
why I find it so fine.
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Not bad, but with potential for improvement.
The rhythm of the verse is in places very bumpy. In my opinion, it would be best if you set yourself to a certain number of syllables per verse.
The fact that the autumn is supposed to come “unnotic” but the air is “fast” fresh and cold does not fit together. Changes that are not noticed or hardly noticed, run smoothly and not abruptly. It is easier to notice jumping, so fast changes.
The second verse describes the opposite of what the first expresses.
“Unequal content” means always different things. April would be a month on the, quite classically speaking, this description would be true. But the fall has unambiguous content that it is recognizable.
Especially at the beginning of the autumn, you usually have many warm days. This is the August in September.
Think more about what you want to express with your choice of words. Don’t take the first steps that come to your mind.
Go on.
Thanks for the star.
Not very philosophical, something naive but otherwise quite ok. Bissel is partially insane, and that’s why it’s partly a bit stabbing. But it’s not bad. Contents.. ok, you could write more flowing, harmonic. But otherwise very nice.