How do you formulate this sentence correctly?

Hello,

I'm supposed to create a new, short text for the website and I'm just not sure how to formulate this sentence correctly 😀

Maybe you can help me 🙂

We are a genuine, regional master electrician company with hundreds of satisfied customers from City X, City X and City X.

Or so

We are a genuine, regional master electrician company with hundreds of satisfied customers from City X, City X and City X.

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Rxscq
7 months ago

I’d rather write:

We are a regional electric master company with hundreds of satisfied customers. Our factories are located in the following cities: X, X and X

Liberty66
7 months ago

Variant two is grammatically wrong, but what has already been commented here.

I would just contact the customers directly:

“Company name” is YOUR regional electric master’s company for/for (‘themes’, perform services). At our work we attach great importance to the satisfaction of our customers. In a detailed consultation, we ensure that you get the best solution for your concern and we fulfill your expectations as perfectly as possible. We provide you with the best possible quality (performance) at a reasonable price. We can offer our extensive service in the entire area around X, Y and Z. Just call us or send us a WhatsApp message….

HabSowiesoRecht
7 months ago

We are a genuine, regional electric master company with hundreds of satisfied customers from city X, city X and city X.

This is more likely, where “real” has nothing to look for here. Are there any unreal electric masters?

PaterAlfonso
7 months ago

… with a hundreden satisfiedhe Customers from …

HabSowiesoRecht
7 months ago
Reply to  PaterAlfonso

Dativ … “hundredsn satisfiedn Customers’.

PaterAlfonso
7 months ago

No. Because it actually means “with hundreds of satisfied customers”. That’s what’s left.

HabSowiesoRecht
7 months ago

Autsch, even with “hundreds of satisfied customers” it is still the Dativ. “The city is full of satisfied customers” would be right. “Hunderte zufriedene Customers” also goes, but mixing is absolutely taboo.