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gutifragerno
1 year ago

The most dangerous word in a content is the word “after”. Because you like to jump into the wrong time form. Instead of the present, the imperfect is used. At the same time, this also leads to the fact that one takes a narrative attitude and no longer summarizes everything briefly and closely.

Example wrong:

After he finally managed to do this, he immediately went to his brother.

Right

After he finally got this, he’s going to his brother right away.

Tannibi
1 year ago

Leave everything that is not absolutely necessary for the action.