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hamberlona
11 months ago

At least the two mistakes:

  1. Max develops well in the group and we support the continuation of the action.
  2. Every Thursday Max visits ergo and physiotherapy. He’s got a few mistakes.

Then maybe better like that:

  1. Max develops so well in the group that we support the continuation of the measure.
  2. Every Thursday Max visits ergo- and physiotherapy, with the exception of only very few short periods.

Reasons: The initial formulation means:

  1. Max only develops well and badly in the group. Without any connection, we support the continuation of the measure.
  2. An ergo- and physiotherapy takes place every Thursday. Unfortunately, I am too stupid to comprehend the contradiction when, on the one hand, I declare that he visits them completely every time, on the other hand that he has mistakes.
spanferkel14
11 months ago

What do you want to improve?

  1. Max develops well in the group and we support the continuation of the action.
  2. Every Thursday Max visits the Ergo-1 and physiotherapy. He has only few times.

1 Do not forget the crossline as a replacement for the missing “therapy”!

Tannibi
11 months ago

Max develops well in the group and we find that he
should continue to participate.

Every Thursday Max visits ergo and physiotherapy
and lacks there rarely.