Help with short story grade 8 (horror)?
I've written a short story (it will be graded), but I'm not entirely satisfied. Could someone take a look at it? (Attached)
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Hey,
I find the idea really good, respect 🙂
Read one more two times about it.Here and there was something wrong with the big and small spells. Otherwise I would describe things more accurately— How do the screams sound? What makes all this seem so creepy? What does she realize that her boyfriend is dead?
So I would add a few more adjectives to awaken more feelings with the reader and describe the place a little creepier ^^
LG Bella
Thank you
Of course <3