Hello, I would be happy if someone could correct it for me?

Definitely one of the most beautiful views I've had when I woke up. It was so magical between those hot air balloons and that sunrise.

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Christian314
1 year ago

That’s so fine, grammatical. I don’t think that’s so happy. The phrase sounds for me like irony for these reasons:

It was so magical between the hot air balloons and the Sunrise.

It was so magical between the hot air balloons and the Sunrise. This sounds so negative. (These people and the people.)

I also wonder how someone can find it nice to see the sunrise between loud hot air balloons.

JMC01
1 year ago

It was definitely…