Harry Potter FF?
Hello, I want to write a Harry Potter novella about a character named Alice. She and her twin sister lived in a children's home and discovered that their parents were famous wizards. Unfortunately, I don't know much more than that. I'd like Alice to get together with Draco. As you can see, I already have a common thread, but I'm not quite sure how it should continue. Alice's backstory is supposed to have something to do with Voldemort, but I don't know much more than that. I'd like to have a fight between Alice and him. Can you please help me?
Thanks in advance, GLG
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Well, a red thread is an act, a core story to which everything is spreading. That’s still missing.
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I don’t know.
Her father was the brother of Lucius Malfoy and Voldemort was angry that his only friend had interest in his children at once. So he ordered him to kill the “unusable” secondborn and his wife and children. Only Abraxas didn’t kill the children over his heart, so he put them out. On his deathbed he stood Lucius and wore him to find his nieces.
When Lucius finally finds Alice and her sister, he is faced with the idea of what to do with them. They conceal, as they should be dead, taking them into the family, as his father wanted and heard it, or getting rid of it, not to excite the anger of the Dark Lord. He decides to marry Draco Alice. That’s how the blood stays in and it’s protected.
But her sister must be sacrificed, as Voldemort at least demands a victim as a punishment, so that they know they belong to him. As a Voldemort Alice’s sister wants to kill so Alice and Draco obey him, but they fight against him.
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I don’t know.
The parents of the twins are the longbottoms. Alice was named after her mother. Augusta believes the superstition that the twins are cursed children, and she was too much three children to provide, so she kept only the heir. The twins also seemed to be Squibs, so they gave them to a children’s home.
When Neville gets sick and needs magic donation / When the twins stand out in school, Augusta confesses the Neville has two sisters and takes the two back into the family. As a pure-blooded girl, Alice finally has a chance with her swarm. But she wants to protect him from Voldemort.
Thank you for these ideas. Now I have an inspiration for my story.
Good luck.
Well, basically, we’re here with the problem that Harry Potter has. Your character finds out she’s a witch, then it goes to Hogwarts, then somehow falls in love with Draco…
Problem here… on the one hand, the story was already there, on the other hand you have to consider one thing when telling the whole thing: They are usually about 11 when they come to school. So maybe it would be better to just let them start in a later year if it is slightly older than 11 (and Draco probably too). Depending on what you’d like to write like that at 13/14/15/16 (as I said… it depends on what’s going to happen, keep the Age of Consent in mind).
Then we’ll figure out a story that the Rowling wrote. It also covers Harry’s entire school runway, so you’d probably throw your figure (if you’re actually writing in the Hogwarts world) into an environment that has already been described by Rowling. Eignen would probably be like this in the direction of Band 5, Orders of the Phoenix… the Trimagic tournament does not play in the background, Voldemort is also somehow back (which would be very interesting for your main character, if necessary) and they are both old enough to really have something with each other.
You see… and with it, for example, you would have at least a setting and an action that takes place in the background, just by the rough setting that offers for your story. This gives the painting a little more colour (of course you can also let your story play in another year of action, and of course your character doesn’t have to be as old as Draco… just as an orientation what thoughts I have made.
Because you then have a kind of background, you can see how your figure reacts to what your figure moves, which is important to you. How does it stand for this or that event that is particularly important for school as such.
This is about character design… characterize it, make an exact picture of it. What is their attitude to pure blossom? Or to Quidditch? What are their favorite fantasies… what do you like about Draco so much (he’s rather an unsympathetic contemporary for himself)? Or does she possibly know anything about him or her?
Here, of course, always stay with the figures of the books… Draco IST is not a very sympathetic contemporary that is described in the books accordingly. Of course you can stretch the IMMER to a certain degree, but (even if this is done in fanfictions)… Draco is not a kuschelhäschen and he should not be (ideally) with you.
As far as this idea is concerned with ‘children’s home’, I don’t necessarily have a great deal against it, it’s just VERY ‘Harry’… maybe you want it, in view of the fact that this part of the story may not be described SO intensively (Rowling had 7 volumes… you want to make a fanfiction from it and I would ideally not necessarily insert time jumps of a decade), reth:)
In this sense, I think there’s a lot of good things going on. What is important is that you have a basic plot, at least the elemental conflict, to which you should be able to shape the character and (because it’s just a fanfiction), that you also seek a setting.
Through the setting alone, Harry Potter has done a lot in my eyes, because there is a lot to play in Hogwarts and the surrounding area, and so much to the whole school, such as the Basilisk Attacks, the Trimagic Tournament or Umbridge’s regime…
If you want to play the story later, it’s hard to watch Draco’s constitution and the pressure that’s on him… that can have immense effects on the characters as such again
In this sense: Know your world, know the characters 🙂 I think if you can do this, that’s a good basis.
Have fun writing 🙂
Thanks for these tips. I took them to my heart and thoughts about the people again.
Nice to meet you if I could help.
I’m sure I don’t want to take you off your idea or something. These are just things that come to my mind at first reading. Ultimately, what you do is decisive:)
And you can write to me again if you might want a short impression of what you think.
Like I said… Fanfictions really write well so that they seamlessly fit into what was given to you can sometimes be very difficult:)