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DODOsBACK
1 year ago

It’s an attempt, but it looks like you just lost the pleasure after the first third.

There is lack of color (floor/water, sky, right house), pre-drawn lines are not wegraded, windows should not be let white when they lead into the interior of a house or boat etc.

If you really fight for a better note, you should at least be aware that you have troubled and not stopped in the middle of it…

Schniddn
1 year ago

I cove your eraser gum, mine were always full of pencil holes 😂 However, I do not find the picture very successful. I’m Artlaie and Erwin Moser doesn’t tell me anything, but the image looks sharp and chaotic to me. Likewise, not too much artistic talent has been given to you (as I am unfortunately also).

SoEineAnanas
1 year ago

I think you could make the background. That white looks kind of boring. Maybe paint the background with a bright colored pencil (yellow or light blue). And only slightly press

Zockerfreak44
1 year ago

I think it looks okay. (I don’t know if that’s true I’m 12 but a real painter 😬)

steefi
1 year ago

Make the picture a bit more colorful.Make the background very lightly colored.Male the bridge. A few more cards, but not next to them, but overlapping.

Maeuschen11
1 year ago

creative.