Poem?
What do you think of this poem
"I want to be everything
I can not decide
I want to be me
And don't suffer from it
I don't want to be like others
Stay true to myself
Because that is only an illusion
You don't want to be like that"
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Nice. Only: “That’s just Schein’ But I get a lot more common.
Yes didn’t tip me to be too lazy for the big key
I’d leave the second verse completely. The poem then works more confidently. In addition, the line is too long and disturbs the visual impression.
In the fifth verse, I’d leave “I kill”, that looks better.
The problem is custom for every verse four verses
Then write “Wel me to decide.” That sounds more confident.
Thank you.
Nen bissl monotonous. Too often comes the word “his”.
The last one is actually
And so it will always remain
I’d like to have a pear of Yvan groll or something
Good text my friend👍🏾