I've been trying my hand at writing poetry (in English). Do you have any suggestions for improvement, criticism, or opinions? Just say anything, I'm open to anything 🙂
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I think she’s good. Sometimes it is easier to write foreign language than in German. continue to be fun.
Thank you.
I like LAST best. With the other three too much is described, there is hardly any room for the reader for his own interpretation/study. I think poems should raise thoughts or feelings with the reader, but don’t pretend.
Right, good aspect, I’ll try the next time. Thanks for your feedback
“Last” is also best.
But I think poems shouldn’t be worth anything. It’s enough for them to SIND.
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Hey!
I love these poems! It was written with a lot of feeling, which I personally like very much. Keep going!
Lg Lylianne
I think all of this is really good. I like it a lot. 😊
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Thank you very much
STARK. If I could see them on Pinterest, I’d go right there. You have a real talent. They’re good.
There’s nothing going on, it’s a little unpleasant to read because there are so many repetitions.
well, what poems do these days reimburse? I do not want to reime at all, which can promote the flow of reading, but often lead to stumbling about it.
And the repetitions are, of course, a stilt, that’s the point.
This answer almost hurts me physically.
I’m afraid you didn’t understand anything here. This is not about REIME, but about GEFÜHLE.
And I believe that the questioner will bring it over wonderfully.