Does that sound okay?
I wrote to the email address of a minor moderator, saying the following:
Ladies and Gentlemen
Is there an autograph address for XY? I think he's a great guy, and I'd like an autograph card from him.
But I was simply connected to the moderator himself!
Does this "great guy" sound okay, or even gay? I didn't think he was writing to me personally.
I think that the mail has been kept somewhat too short and, moreover, is somewhat too formal, the “Very Dear Ladies and Gentlemen” somehow does not fit into a fan request, here you can write something more personal like “love/r” and then the corresponding name, for example “Moderator/in”.
“Gibt it” is somehow too strongly written in the passive at the beginning, that might be more beautiful to formulate.
I just thought that I’m not directly connected to the moderator, but with his team.
It sounds great.You don’t have to worry that it doesn’t sound good.I think it sounds very good.
You can write, “that he is a class type,