Could I publish this?
I've been interested in the music business for two years now and have written a song about the last three weeks and would like to ask you what you think of it and whether you would listen to something like this:
In nature in nature fabulous nature in nature everything is gone and they come in nature everything grows and they come they come to get us then it would be that nature is soaked …
Of course it goes on I have invested about 10 hours in the song what do you think I want your honest opinion please
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When I used to write music and lyrics, it only went public when friends and I were satisfied with it, it could play and was ready for the next performance. Until then, text and melody for outsiders was a secret.
I personally see the text posted by you as the beginning for something, but not yet mature for a publication.
You could publish it, but I doubt someone would want to hear it.
From what you wrote there, I can’t see how it should ever be a song. It seems to me like an insane series of random words without rhythm or speech melody…
Well, that’s just a little detail that’s just the beginning
And even there is nothing like that. The beginning should be as captivating, otherwise no one wants to hear.
I can honestly imagine it hard as a lyrics, that’s more like poem vibes.
Under music I still understand something other than your attempts to text I think that’s nothing.
No, I wouldn’t.
That’s not a text, that’s Mumpitz. Apart from the fact that the music is still not to be heard by the sample. Is that better than the text?
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You really needed 10 hours for that? And what do you mean “soaking nature.”
That’s what others shake from the sleeve in 3min. And even text with meaning.
Texts are not yours.
I can do it in 30 seconds.
Drinks and does not crow oh cloud / look like ne fabule Polke / Jupheidi and jupheida / Trallali and trallala.
In 3min I never needed about 8-10h because I had thought
Unfortunately, it’s like it is: lyrics aren’t really your thing.
That’s why I say, text is not yours. Not only that you need very long, your text is also not very productive/senseful/ meaningful. And I know what I’m talking about, my whole family is musically gifted, makes music in one direction or another, and the lyrics would have gone much faster for me personally. But it’s not bad, you wanted an honest opinion.
Gänsehaut it was such a beautiful text please publish it
And it always means that I am evil.
Without music and the complete text, such a question makes no sense, unfortunately