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So I didn't notice the man in the black cloak approaching, how he looked around, how his gaze fell on me, his eyes widening in surprise. I also didn't notice him grabbing me and lifting me up as if I weighed nothing. And I didn't feel his teeth on my neck. How he bit gently until my heart stopped beating. I didn't wake up until much later, and only later did I find out what had happened. The man still had me firmly in his grip. It took me a brief moment to realize I'd been kidnapped. But why? What did this man want from me? I wanted to scream, but an ice-cold hand pressed itself over my mouth. The stranger leaned forward threateningly and looked me in the eyes. I noticed the small necklace with the pendant in the shape of a human heart dangling around his neck. I didn't know why, but the sight of it sent a shiver down my spine. He noticed my gaze and quickly hid the necklace. Then he glared at me again, threateningly, with his dark brown eyes. My heart was pounding in my throat. I couldn't find a way out. The stranger, my kidnapper, still pressed his cold hand firmly over my mouth. He was astonishingly strong; if I fought back, I wouldn't stand a chance. A tear ran down my cheek. I knew I might not have much longer to live. But why had this man kidnapped me? I was a young orphan girl; no one would pay any ransom for me. The man quickened his pace. I wondered where he was running to and if no one was trying to stop him. After all, he was a kidnapper. But he ran through the streets unchallenged.