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Kruemmelkugel
10 months ago

Hey!

I had also thought to write something about LGBTQ… but didn’t do that here was my rough Plott:

– the protagonist Alexandru, but all call him Alex (he is trans) moves with his family from the village to the city. His parents are very controversial and do not know about his feelings.

The city in which he is drawn is characterized by a strong right-hand jolt, which leads to Alex’s rather inconspicuous behavior. He is afraid -> understandably.

At some point, Alex gets to know a guy and they’re gonna be friends…but Alex doesn’t know that the guy’s actually very cool, just as little as the guy knows Alex is trans.

Alex is photographed one day by a student of his school when he kisses another boy. The photo is forwarded directly to all pupils and spreads like a running fire, which also tells Alex new mate about the thing…but not only the…also Alex sister has sent this photo and threatens to tell her parents.

Alex is now heavily preyed. In school and on the streets psychologically finished and partly physically approached.

One evening, a few pupils follow him home, including Alex’s buddy, who assumes that they just want to scare him…

Pustekuchen…the troop begins to push Alex back and forth and are on it and to beat the “trans-sein” out of his body…

Alex Buddy must now either watch and make his friendship with Alex among his queerness, or risk his own health to help his friend.

With me in the Plott Alexandru dies in the end, because despite his friendship with the guy, his life is destroyed from his point of view. He is hated by everything, doesn’t belong to it, his parents don’t support him… he kills, leaves a suicide note.

And the last sentence of history would be (with Alexandrus voice):

“The only thing my parents ever wanted was me, their child, as they knew and loved, did not learn to lose…and yet it is that which had to happen unavoidably so that they could understand how much they still loved me.”

In the story there is a lot of obvious and hidden criticism…also a lot of criticism to the parents…for their child, as they knew and wanted it, would have lost it like that…either because it had changed externally or just because of the lack of acceptance and in this case death, because there was nothing more worth living.

Sonnensturm2309
10 months ago

Hi FCCFCB669,

So I would do it the way you number the chapters, for example: 1st chapter, 2nd chapter, etc. It saves you a lot of time as you don’t have to think about the names. In addition, the reader may know how it goes on and if there is nothing in the capitum name, it is even more exciting.
It’s just my opinion

Sunstorm

Sonnensturm2309
10 months ago
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Silvalis
10 months ago

I don’t know exactly what you mean. Do you think you don’t have any chapter names? Then I can’t help you because I don’t know your story and don’t know what you planned. Personally, I don’t find the title so exciting, best find out another person who doesn’t tell everything. In addition, the quotations for “My bad life” would be first downstairs and then upstairs, which I can’t show you here because it doesn’t work. “Summs” I would, in any case, write small. But as I said, another title would probably be better.

You probably want to know the content of the chapters. I don’t really know about LGBTQ, but I would say that your protagonisz is being bullied and then someone dies in his life, which was very important. The protagonist has to recover from it.

If you need chapter names, just take numbers, that’s easiest.

LG Aliquis