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Hello! I'm a foreigner and I wrote a little poem. Because you're German, do you find any mistakes? It would be great if you could rate it. Thanks.
My little sweet beautiful dog,
you are very good, my mouth is happy.
Your life is easy every day,
that I like to become you now.
You only have fun in life,
jump in the forest, lie on the grass.
In the house you have a place
This is how you relax after exercise.
Have only the luck in life,
the happy wind calls you back.
The whole world is free for you,
Your little life makes me very happy.
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My little sweeter, beautiful dog,
You’re very good, happy is my mouth.
Your life is easy every day,
that I am now,
to be likeyou are killing.You only have fun in life,
jumps in the forest, lie on the ridgeS.
In the house you havethere) a place, [I would leave.]
onin the relax after sports.I only have happiness in life,
the happy wind calls you back.
The whole world is free for you,
very happy your little life.
[As a poet, some linguistic freedoms may be allowed.]
“The whole world is free for you,
very happy your little life me.”
That’s very nice.
“throws my mouth.”
That’s weird.
“that I like you now to be.”
This is incomprehensible and also grammatically wrong.